Stomach Churning

Sitting in his living room James felt something going in circles in his stomach.
He asked his Mum, “Mum, can we go to the doctors tomorrow? My stomach feels wrong.”
“Okay,” said Mum.

The next day James and his Mum went to their family doctors. When they arrived the old woman at the reception told James and his mother to pass on to the doctors room.  James explained to the doctor about what has been happening and how it felt around his stomach.
Doctor Miracle replied, “From the sound of it you have a stomach churning.”
“What's a stomach churning?” asked James.  
Doctor Miracle remembered. “I have a machine in my cupboard which you can see everything in your stomach. That might make it easier to understand what I mean.”

The doctor pushed the green button on the top of the machine and held a little blue ball against James’ stomach. On the side of the machine there was a screen which you see everything inside the stomach.  “Wow!” said James with excitement, “That looks like a rollercoaster in my stomach.”
Doctor Miracle replied, “In fact it’s kinda like a rollercoaster. I used this machine to show you what it looks like because I knew you wouldn’t believe me.”
“Am I gonna die? do I have to take some sort of surgery of something?” James asked feeling was frightened.
Doctor Miracle giggled and said “ I’ll give you a special treatment, Mum will make chicken soup for you and the next hour or so you’ll be fine.
“Thank you very very much” replied James.  When they  arrived back home mum made chicken soup for James. 30 minutes later James felt better than ever.

In class we are learning about the dangers of smoking and what could happen to you.

The danger of smoking

If you smoke it’s likely you’ll die sooner. In my argument I will be talking about the consequences that can happen to you when you smoke. I'll be talking about how people are influenced.

The risk of smoking is getting lung cancer or lung disease. Smokes and cigarettes holds more than 4000 chemicals. If you smoke cigarettes it is likely that you could get heart disease and can cause serious damage to your brain.

If you have any body in your family that smokes, it’s 50% that you will get influenced in to smoking. Most teens smoke because they are influenced by other friends and relatives.

In my opinion smoking is bad because it could cause serious damage to your body.

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